Re: Feedback on my poem please?
Jah, the puntuation is toooo much ,,,dats all i can say bt its lovelyyy
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In this allusion I want to assume a prison, and it's late for me so it took a bit to try to understand. There are some repetitions I thought not needed to add impact. I'll just point out 1. L 3, I...
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Theres a poet who wrote like this with a lot commas and same type describing every word he describes. He describes it each time with different words but in same time talking about it how he feels. Well...
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Solitary confinement, In the coldest of rooms, One of many cold rooms in the eastern hall, The darkest hall, Overlooking a cemetery, Where gravestones only read numbers, There a few thousand lie 6 feet...
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